BLESS THE BROKEN ROAD Part 19
BTBR~18Just as the sun needs to set in the west, I need you. You are my sun. Youre the reason I rise in the morning, not the ranch, not the children, you. I dont want to be apart from you. It would be...
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I guess Nick and Jason are about to join Jarrod in jail.This story is a scream! I'm having a great time with it. Alison
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I'm laughing so hard! This chapter is terrific, Mrs. Nick! Will this mean Jarrod, Nick and Jason will be in the same jail cell?? And I love Vic talking with Aggie's mom. What plot will they be cooking...
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What an absolute hoot! One great line after another ... so much fun to read and reread!! Can't wait to see the plan Vic and Muriel come up with. It's about time The Mothers take control!!The cuss box...
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This is a wild tale, MrsN, and as usual I'm wondering how it's gonna all turn out!! Will Nick and Jason wind up in jail with Jarrod? Will Vic and Mrs James' plot succeed? Like the announcers say,...
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Get your clothes on woman!" reminds me of that ray stevens song 'the streak' - 'ethel, you get yer cloze on!!' the next chapter can't come soon enough!!!
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Oh I absolutely loved this chapter! First Victoria is joining forces with Mrs. James. Good for them! Agatha has no chance at all now.And then the Laura/Etta conversation was wonderful. Nick is making...
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Another visually wonderful chapter. Jarrod in jail (again) and getting scolded by his mother (liked Heath's quick exit). Yep Jason and Nick are evenly matched. Loved the ending with both of them "out"...
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That was simply too funny. Man, do I wish we could have some of these stories filmed with the original actors!
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Absolutely wonderful, Mrs.Nick B.....I could hear Jarrod's voice in my head when Vic was talkin' to him in the jail....Nick and Jason, Vic and Muriel....everyone seems evenly matched Now how are you...
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Ahh, Mrs.Nick,A thoroughly enjoyable read. My favorite part, the visual in my head made me laugh outloud:Laura rushed to Nicks side. She cradled his head in her lap and gently patted his face. Nick,...
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Yep that's definately Nick an Jason. fists first and questions later. Thank god Heath is the sensible one. Great post
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I was trying to pick a bit to quote but what the hey the whole thing is superb! You are so deft with your characterization and so good at dialogue it is like watching a play rather than reading a...
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You're right, Linda, there's too much to pick out just ONE good quote! I'm wondering too if Nick is going to end up in jail. Loved the two mothers beginning to plot...I'll put my money on Vic to get...
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Still laughing at the last part. This whole story has been delightful fun from the first...I do hope you have a happy ending in mind for Aggie and Jarrod...the rest of the Barkley clan is gonna be...
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This is becoming my favorite Big Valley Episode! Your writing is better than the actual television series. I can see the characters so clearly in your writing. I hope this story never ends. Keep up...
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